He stood before the shallow sea And wondered what went wrong If only for the simple things Like solitude and song He stood before the shallow sea And thought that he’d have plenty But then desire came along And ‘fore he knew he’d spent it The window opened once again The sunshine danced along He looked below to roses bloomed and soon he saw a throng The throng of roses flowered now - Enact it if you could The petals were a mass of red The scent well understood He knew his acts were his alone And within his own belief A second chance had welcomed him 'twas more than just relief
It’s a beautiful and poetic reflection on the fleeting nature of desire and the importance of finding contentment in the simple things in life. The imagery of the shallow sea and the blooming roses is particularly striking. It’s a reminder to appreciate the present moment and to find joy in the things that bring us peace and solitude. Thank you for sharing this piece of writing.
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Thank you for dropping by. You describe my poem beautifully. Yes, the simple pleasures are so often forgotten, aren’t they?
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